Helpp

[jiritt0]

i hope the title draws some eyes

I'm looking for some feedback on my grad school personal statement letter to include with my applications...

the word file is attached.. I think its pretty dang solid.. but im rather biased in retrospect of my own work

I tried to answer these main questions while keeping it simple and to the point;

Why health psych?
What in the past made you choose this?
What do you look forward to doing in the future with this?
Why should they accept you?
What separates you from other applicants?


if you feel i can change things please say something.. any feedback is appreciated! Im also giving it to some of my coworkers and smart friends..



edit: ok its not attached.. but it is at ironmass, here is the url

http://www.ironmass.com/attachments/...c?d=1154040719

[jiritt0]

i hope the title draws some eyes

haha


u cl hooligans

[Seroph4x]

ill try and help later bro im busy right now sorry